
I also couldn't figure out what type of organization Chevy and Seneca work for. And not only that, whenever our MCs went somewhere new, we never had any description of the setting, so I literally could never place myself within the story. But it didn't work for me because I never got a sense of place, of location. I have no sense of geographical location, and I have to assume that that's done on purpose by the author so that the story can, theoretically, be set anywhere. But while I liked the overall storyline and I thought the author did a good job of portraying a sympathetic villain, a few things hindered my enjoyment.įirst, the world-building is nonexistent. With all of the glowing reviews, I certainly expected to.


Within the Mind is a 90k word romantic suspense with lots of snark, an ominous gramophone, and finger cuddling, because we all know spooning isn’t as great as it sounds. As the two are forced to face what is keeping them apart, together they realize that there’s more to the mind and heart than either of them know. It will take everything Chevy and Seneca can give to stop the darkness that could consume their minds. The dark world draws the two men together in a way they never dreamed. Drawn into a memory where it’s hard to figure out where the truth exists, they realize that there may be more to the serial killer than they originally thought. They are even more unprepared for the monsters they find inside the man’s mind.

He delves into their memories and can pick out minute details that will help them put the criminal behind bars.īut neither Chevy nor Seneca are prepared when they are asked to go into the mind of a serial killer in hopes of finding survivors. As detective, he uses this ability to find peace for victims who have been hurt or attacked. They’ve worked with each other for two years, and even though Chevy might secretly find his partner charming and attractive, playful harassment is all they have.Ĭhevy was born with a unique gift that allows him to go into the memories of others.

He’s smart, sexy, and confident, much to Chevy’s annoyance.
